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Pathway of light.

I was so scared of this moment

but new you would be waiting

You was their as promised

I approached with anticipation.


You showed me the light

casting all of my fears away

Then holding out your hands

you beckoned me near to say.


There's nothing to fear my child

this pathway was built for you

I am the angel from heaven

who was sent to guide you through.

 

I took hold of her hands

then joined her in the light

Now I was leaving this world

but I was glowing bright. 

 

 

 

 

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  • HeavenonEarth
    October 1, 2007

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    This was amazing I loved your poetry you have penned here I do need to know though poet which picture is the prompt for you on this work. You might want to check your spelling also
    I'll come back around to check & see if you've done this before I close this contest
    All the best~
    ~Joy


    • Timespell
      October 1, 2007
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      Thanks

      Sorry, I forgot to put the picture prompt in.
      I was getting carried away like usual.

      Thanks for reading, glad you liked my poem.

      All the best

      ~T.S~


  • HeavenonEarth
    September 30, 2007
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    Thank you for entering
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