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Within The Moment Of A Smile

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The moment I saw you,
I knew it was true,
The love that we would share held
a fulfillment in time,
Like a rose blossomed,
Wherein a memory touches,
Keeping those special promises
and within those rare moments
I see within my mind
your special smile,
And I knew
that life touches
in echoes
complete within itself.

Sept. 16, 1999

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Written January 21st, 2002

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  • sidewinder silver member
    January 23, 2002
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    Thank you Blupoetess !
    I'm glad you enjoyed it !


  • April Renee
    January 23, 2002
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    beautiful

    ~*~adriana~*~