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Unknown Mistake

I made a mistake
Forgive me, I beg
You complete me
But we're a world apart
How can I save us?
We're sinking fast
And you have no clue

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  • AngelDeAmor
    October 4, 2007

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    Such strong sentiments chibbs. I always confuse your age in my mind when I read one of your poems, such intense emotions and clarity from someone as young as you. You prove to all that one can not judge understanding and knowledge by age alone.