For you, I want to write beauty
With golden words to litter the page.
Curling soft syllables to stir your thoughts
So my parchment transforms into a stage
Where the feelings from my heart
can fondly be played
For you, I want to sing harmony
With soft silver notes of clarity,
sharp and clear to echo in your ears
So my song sweetens the air you breathe
And my melody hums happy devotion
Forever to you , from me
For you, I want to craft exquisitely
With bronzed tree turned on my lathe
A cherry dark wood, deep and solid
So I can carve for you a polished box
To hold more of my amour
with every mark I shave
For you, my guide, I want to show my truth,
For you, my love, I want to show my peace
For you, my friend, I want to show my flaws
For you, my spouse, I want to show my soul
For you, my all, I want to be my all.
A contest entry
- It's All About Love by myXheartXsings.
318 points, ended October 3, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For Love by live in love.
500 points, ended October 9, 2007, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - All For Love. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended October 28, 2007, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - my muse is suffering - GIVE ME INSPIRATION! by ellipsist.
1100 points, ended November 3, 2007, 60 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Writers guide to love by only1love4ever.
380 points, ended November 8, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love Poems by LissaRox.
550 points, ended March 18, 2008, 46 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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oh gosh, this is spectacular, very creative. I like it a lot. thank you for entering, good luck
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hmmm... I am appreciative of the thoughts behind it and the message itself is quite inspirational... I, personally, am not a fan of the rhyme or repetition though... not so much, here... although this is quite beautiful in a classical sense... reminiscent of poetry of old, indeed!
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Very nicely written for the chosen prompt, isn't love a grand thing? Very well written, I like the repetition, good job on getting the Bronze...Scott
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, Josephine
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Excellent
For you, I want to write beauty
With golden words to litter the page
Curling soft syllables to stir your thoughts
So my parchment transforms into a stage
where the feelings from my heart
can be fondly played
Wonderfull words
In this authors opion
this should have placed
Rick
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I wish i would have had more points.... i loved your entry and had u down as an honorable mention. I really think this is a great piece, thank you for your entry and i'm sry.
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nice one
though the entire poem was very cute to read but I like specially the last part of the poem..
For you, my friend, I want to show my flaws
For you, my spouse, I want to show my soul
For you, my all, I want to be my all.
keep it up.
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I love this... wow this is like me and Cory... my (now) ex... wow. and I still love him... always will... haha. good work! good lukc in both the contests! You should do great in both of them! keep it up!
Crimson
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