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It's All Over

I'd like to chose my own way
I'd like to chose my own death.
Not the candy-coated one you have for me
Because I want you to finally wake up and see,

That I'm tired of being tormented to hell,
By all your pretty lies
Bruising my body and mind
Till I'm permanently half blind.

I'm so used to never living,
That's what I'm tired of.
I'm tired of being to used
by perverts previously abused

I've tried to stop this from happening
But my arms are far to weak.
I don't think I can hold on any longer,
I've given up on becoming stronger.

I just know, I know,
I know there's no point to this.
It's over,
It's All Over.

 

 

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For Someone, Who knows who she is. And Who knows that I love her. And I hope I've done her words proud.

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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 6, 2007

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    Very Touching!

    This is an extgremely beautifully penned poem all roudn and its just friggin beautiful how you werote this. I really felt the e0-motion of the words hit me hard through out and I really loved the message you sent to her. very nice work


  • PastelMoons gold member
    October 1, 2007

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    What a lovely yet heart-breaking tribute
    I love so many of the lines
    too many to quote back
    honestly I simply just love
    this piece as a whole!
    Impressive!
    ~Pastel


  • Lady Australis silver member
    September 30, 2007
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    i love you sweety
    this is really deep..


  • Girl With Guitar silver member
    September 30, 2007
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    I believe you have done her words proud. ♥

    Spelling darling. Very very bad

    I love you and you've definitly put this together amazingly. My mind has been read and it feels strange because I never let anyone in this much.

    ♥♥♥
    Even if I go tomorrow, I'll always be here for you. No matter what, I'll haunt you forever, even when you too are gone. I'll haunt your grave, or we can have ghost tea parties together. I love you so much, more than anyone ever. Even the supposed loves of my life.
    You'll be the last thought going through my head.
    No regrets baby. Ever.
    ♥♥♥


    • Ravenblood
      September 30, 2007

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      Whoops. This is what happens when i type fast. Grrr.

      And you let me in because you trust me, and i trust you... and nothings taking that away from us... I'ev let other friends in, but you're still the closed to my heart.
      I Don't want you to go yet baby, but its not my choice. So remember - I love you, forever until and after my dying day, nothing shall ever change that, not even a million tears of regret...

      • Girl With Guitar silver member
        September 30, 2007

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        I don't want to go yet either, but I feel like I need to. I don't want to leave you and I don't want you to leave me but sometimes things just have to be. As morbid as it is, I'd love to go find some pretty trees with you but I don't want to be bringing you down. We should never have regrets, not about anything. Tell someone you love them before it's too late and take chances because you never know when you won't be able to anymore.
        I've never cried such large tears, but they're all saying how much I love you so the bigger the better.

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