I only ever wanted to feel
your loving touch.
Those smooth doting hands.
Could you caress me?
Hold me with such love.
So comes your embrace,
And I know I’m safe.
Lay here with me
Let us find our special place
Can I be lost in you for a moment?
Can we lose ourselves completely?
An ocean will part for us
while we create it together
Our love.
Author notes
option four for random options contest
A contest entry
- Intimate Intentions. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended October 4, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Random Options by Megan Awesome.
470 points, ended November 1, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - JUST TWO DAYS TO REACH 1000 ENTRIES !!!! ( BE A PART OF THIS RECORD BREAKING CONTEST ) by Alex Hex.
300 points, ended May 1, 2008, 526 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is beautiful. Truely beautiful. I love it. The way it flowed, the way it was worded, everything. This is just what I was looking for with the option. I don't even think I can choose a favorite part! Thank you so much for entering my contest and good luck!!!
Megan -
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Aw, your too kind, Thank you
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I only ever wanted to feel
your loving touch.
Those smooth doting hands.
Could you caress me?
don't we all wish for those hands
Riftkin -
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We do and those who have them, are very very lucky, Like me, hehehe
Thanks you for such a nice comment
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Love the imagery. Wonderful piece of writing
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Your to kind, thank you. I look forward to returning the favour
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Thank you for your lovely entry, Josephine
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my pleasure, I am new around these parts and trying to enter competitions and glad to find it pushing my creativity so its all my pleasure
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really liked this piece! nicely worded and it worked for me! great job!
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Lay here with me
Let us find our special place
Can I be lost in you for a moment?
Can we lose ourselves completely?
What a tender request. The desire to lose oneself completely in and with another is, to me, what love is about. Your words and the thoughts behind them are so beautiful, touching my heart with the emotion in them.
My best wishes to you in the contest.
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