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See you on the other side

Another one is calling me.
"Come to this side where we can be free".
Spinning and twisting, I'm losing control.
"Your body now mine, I will never let go."

Can't help but to fade away,
Into the darkness, out of the day.
"I will carry you away to a sweet little town,
No-one knows up, and no-one knows down.
Many things you long to see,
I will give them to you, do not fear".
I want to control my mind, my body and my soul.
I'm feeling so cold, so lost and alone.
I keep running, but I have no place to hide.
"Stop struggling and come with me,
Come with me to the other side".


Author notes

This is korn inspired. yay! I will be working on this piece if i have time, I want to make it the best it can be. It's another good ol' conversation with the reaper. I love those.

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  • Glasyalabolas
    October 5, 2007

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    I can see this as a Korn song. You should expand it, add a chorus and more verses, it would work very well.

    Good write.