She is never alone,
the voices whispering in her ears,
keeping her company during
the long days and long nights.
No need for family.
No need for friends.
No need for anyone.
She is never alone,
the voices whispering in her ears,
keeping her company during
the long days and nights.
Telling her secrets.
Making her smile.
Making her laugh.
She is never alone,
the voices whispering in her ears,
keeping her company during
the long days and long nights.
But commands they now pass.
Telling her to do this.
Telling her to do that.
She is never alone,
the voices whispering in her ears,
keeping her company during
the long days and long nights.
Telling her secrets.
Making her cry.
Making her scream.
She is never alone,
the voices whispering in her ears,
keeping her company during
the long days and long nights,
she spends in her padded cell.
Please tell me what you think
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Shivers...
I really liked this and with the rhyming it made it, addive, I suppose. and I loved the lines;
But commands they now pass.
Telling her to do this.
Telling her to do that.
It gives the voices shape and personalities.
Just pointing out though, in the last line of that verse you have spelled 'her' wrong.
But well done in this and keep writing with great ideas.
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I'm glad you liked it
Thankyou.
oh and thanks for pointing out the mistake, really apprecitate it
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this is deep..... i like it...
nice....
xxxxx
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