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"All God's Children"...

“A coin for Charon, new shoes for the road.”

So, the Museum guide says, Romans blessed

Their dead away. “Sound logic”, he opines,

“For those whose Empire’s heart was the Golden Milestone!”

(Though Merlin, Otherworldly wise, knew better:

The rough-spliced sandal-strap would serve the boy

An hour and all eternity…)

 

But Christians need no offering of shoes;

(Angels in icons glide on stocking-feet),

Dante through death’s three kingdoms, Bedford John,

Or Inkling Jack – none (if my memory serves)

Speaks of the Pilgrim’s need for sturdy footwear.

Only the barefoot dream a well-shod heaven;

Plantation slaves hymned golden slippers; prattling

Of scarlet boots, Avvakum’s young disciples

Joyfully leapt into the fire…

 

Yet, viewing Roman death-shoes (simulated

From nailmarks in the clay) my mind returns

To the dead of Kurapaty – Windflower Hill –

Where beneath pines, among the bones and bullets,

So many shoes survived the march to death,

So many to be listed: peasant “walkers”,

Gumboots made from old tyres, elegant

Feminine pantoufles, sturdy city lace-ups,

A gym-shoe trademarked “Riga”… Cleaned and counted,

Not for museums (“Footwear, nineteen-thirties,

Mid-Stalin-era”), not to identify

The dead by name (though some, they say, have found

Relics there of their kin) only to seek

Not who they were,  but what, what kind, what genus

Of people perished there… And toiling through

My long translation-task, and coining terms

Where English had none, I found but one answer:

Peasant and scholar, poet, clerk and worker –

All trades, all grades of life lie in those finds

Of lasting leather… Do not send to find

For whom the bell tolls, Master Donne; ask rather

Whom the shoe fits! For snugly it fits thee,

And him and her and ye… and, likewise, me…

Author notes


PLEASE EXCUSE THIS LONG EXPLANATION - but the subject and some of the allusions may not be familiar to all members - though I presume that that Stalin's purges are -alas -sufficiently well-known.

This poem refers, in particular, to the mass-murder of up to 200,000 victims, shot at Kurapaty ("Windflower Hill") just outside Minsk, capital of Belarus, during the Stalin purges of 1937-41.

The burial site was discovered and excavated during the final years of the Soviet Union, and although the Soviet authorities (even then, in spite of the new official policy of glasnost - "openness"!)tried to claim that the killings dated from WWII and that the Nazis were responsible, the archaeological evidence (as well as some personal testimonies of old people who, as children, had lived near the site) overwhelmingly confirmed the earlier date!

The victims' clothes had for the most part rotted - but metal fastenings and trimmings and anything made from rubber or leather (in particular, shoes) had lasted, and was subjected to thorough archaeological/forensic study. It was my task to translate the Belarusian investigators' report into English.


Most of the "literary" and historical allusions in the poem will, I think, be familiar to the majority of Allpoetry readers:
However, in case some are not, I should, however, perhaps remind you that
"Jack" (C.S) Lewis - member of the famous Oxford "Inklings" literary group - wrote a religious-allegorical work "The Pilgim's Regress" - a kind of modern and personal answer to the "Pilgrim's Progress" of John Bunyan ("Bedford John");


Also, I should perhaps mention that during the 17th century Great Schism in the Russian Orthodox Church, the Arch-Priest Avvakum was one of the leading figures among the "Old Believers", many of whom, including small children, voluntarily burned themselves to death;

and a Welsh legend tells how Merlin saw a young lad spend his money on sweetmeats instead of getting his sandal repaired - and when a bystander criticised the lad, Merlin said that the knotted strap would last "long enough" - foreseeing that within an hour the lad would fall into the river and drown.

The title of this poem (as you will probably recognize) comes from the traditional Afro-American "spiritual" "I've gotta shoes, you've gotta shoes, all God's children's got shoes" (I ask pardon of Afro-Americans if I have not transcribed their demotic correctly!)

and Dante and John Donne surely need no explanation!

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 30, 2008

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    Humm..I like the story..and the message here..with a skilful poetic journey.....well done..and thanks for sharing it...


  • Keith
    July 6, 2008

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    Can one stand in another's shoes? Can one walk a mile in them? And what a waste of precious human life in the name of....what?
    Great poem. Truly. K.


  • Ephiphany
    July 4, 2008

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    Well spoken, and I do appreciate your 'Author's Notes' very helpful information, this was full of live imagery, I think you've done a wonderful job with this entry.

    Good luck in the contest

    -ephiphany


  • Keeperofthestars
    April 6, 2008

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    This is a very descriptive poem and is very good. Thank you for sharing your gift with us!


  • Kari gold member
    March 17, 2008
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    Wow, very very deep and impressive. Well done!

  • ecrivain01
    March 12, 2008

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    Well, it's an excellent poem ...

    and I wonder if you would have any objection to my featuring it on my blog?

    http://poetsporch.blogspot.com/

    I hope you're having a good week, or as good as possible under the circumstances.


  • Luminescence
    February 27, 2008

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    Thank you so much for the explaination .... lol. I'm not very good on the allusions that you have throughout the piece and that is what probably made it so difficult to understand.

    Thank you so much for entering my contest and good luck
    ~lumin


  • Fallen Archangel
    December 30, 2007

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    Yes indeed, thank you very much for the notes, lol

    The poem itself at first glance was quite confusing and hard to follow. And without its explaination it was difficult to understand how it went with the thought of my contest in mind.

    But the meaning inside of it and the abnormally vast amount of thought obviously put into such a work is mind-blowing and just shatters my lack of understanding.

    So after I understand what each form and part of this poem was being I can clearing understand everything you mentioned, and It it becomes a far more brillient work than I thought of it at first glace and first read through.

    For I alas am one fo those who knew nothing of most of the events and characters taking place in the storywork.

    So I thank you for the vast amount of education brought form your notes as I also thank you for contributing your work into my contest.

    --Lucian Adonis

    • Vera Rich
      January 8, 2008
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      Thank you for your appreciation - and for the silver award...


  • adios muchachos gold member
    November 16, 2007
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    Holy ----!

  • garde a l eau
    November 16, 2007

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    I'm grateful for your author notes, and I enjoyed reading this poem. It is quite another take on sandals (or shoes) than I would have ever dreamed. You did inform your readers and gave me pause to question reason and the history mankind is so prone to repeat. You are obviously very educated and I see much here that I did not know. Yes, it could have me.

    I find it very ironic that as I read this, there is an advertisement for Sketchers shoes on the page!


  • LadyLavender gold member
    November 15, 2007
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    not only are you an impressive writer, but a teacher as well.


  • redmarkonthewall
    October 29, 2007

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    Wow! Ok, long explanation but that does help it quite a bit so good write. Wasn't the easiest poem to wrap my head around but I think I understand most of it. And yes Stalin's purges are sufficiently well-known a theme for my contest. So thank you for your entry and good luck.


  • 2lullabyhaven
    October 27, 2007

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    Thank you for your entry into my contest, thank you for the indepth notes as well, this is a weighty piece and I appreciate your efforts lol

  • ashjoe76
    October 10, 2007

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    Excellent

    It's been long since I've read something that is so filled with myth, history and philosophy. This shows the real power of poetry. I am sure that the images and scraps of information will last long in my mind. Best regards!


  • astralshepherd gold member
    October 4, 2007

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    Vera, I came by to read some of your other work, and, mainly to thank you for posting your poem in my contest, Breast Cancer Awareness, I truly do appreciate it. I wanted to let you know how much it means to me, personally, for you to have entered my contest, and to make that statement away from the contest. This poem here, "All God's Children" is , a profoundly powerful view of an atrocity. I do appreciate the background information and it helps to sort through some of the images, references that could get lost in the softness of our western minds. My wife is a teacher, has taken groups to Simon Wiesenthal Center together with its world renowned Museum of Tolerance in Los Angeles where we heard, first hand, testimony of victims of hate and intolerance. This poem has as deep an impact as hearing a first hand account, the way you have created the exacting images and phrases, I think is so very impacting as well as implicating.


    Blessings and best wishes,

    ~richard


  • Antipodi
    September 30, 2007

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    Sadly this is becomming common and it is those we trust seem to be more commonly indicated an excellent write ...Good luck in the contest


  • MargaretG
    September 30, 2007

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    powerful

    Bone, bullets and shoes. This is living history, an eye-witness to atrocity, which lay secret for generations. I found the whole of the last stanza moving, the previous two were interesting and gave a context. The last two lines are terrific and show exactly why we should care about these old shoes.

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