Listening to you breathe, is my favourite sound
Darling, it helps me relax and sleep, I have found
Laying in bed, your head on the pillow next to me
Watching your breasts rise and fall, is a sight to see
I love it, when you are breathing, gentle and calm
Close to me, your head gently wrapped in my arm
You breathe much harder, when you are in ectasy
Short, sharp breaths, when we make love passionately
For hours I lie awake, listening to you breathe
Helps me forget all my woes, it puts me at ease
Sometimes you gasp for breath, when we go for a run
We fall in a heap together, it can be ever so much fun
You soon get your breath back, and we start to kiss
We will make love on the grass, and it will be pure bliss
Your breathing gets quicker, as your body starts to spasm
For a few seconds, you do not breathe at all, you do orgasm
Soon we hug each other, and I tell you, I love you dear
Slight smile on my face, as you breathe softly, in my ear
Now you know the sound I love, please do believe
You`ll always make me happy, as long as you breathe
Author notes
My Favourite sound for Delaney34
A contest entry
- Fill My Mind With Sound by Dalaney.
600 points, ended October 7, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything that has good rhyme!(pre-writes allowed) by ExpectingMommy18.
650 points, ended October 25, 2007, 73 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Filled with emotion, any kind of poetry by Vidasmoke.
675 points, ended July 14, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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niccccccceeeeeee
goood job
and good luck
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Congrats on the honorable mention. I must say I did enjoy this quite a bit. I found it loving and well written... just what I was looking for. And the picture was gorgeous. You really lost yourself a trophy by not following directions. Better luck next time.
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Interesting poem ...
and it would work well in a lot of contests on this site, but not in this one. It is not what I'm looking for. Not that the idea is bad, it's not. It just isn't what I'm looking for.
Good luck with the other contests. -
so romantic and filled with such obvious love. great poem with lovely flow and rhyme. thank you for entering and good luck with the contest.
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Oh wow! I love this piece, I'm definitely going to bookmark it! This is like the most beautiful way of telling someone how much you love them. It's almost like an addiction, but in the good way. Wow. Love it!
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This was really really really beautiful I loved this poem immensely this poem needs a gold trophy defo. God Bless!
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...absolutely sigh worthy...thank you
for "showing" me the sound of breath,
and what it means to you. Love, Lane
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