A shadow in the darkness
Is what I shall always be,
A shadow in the darkness,
No bright light following me,
The world is at a stand still,
As life passes me by in a blurr,
The things I once dreamed of
Now dead in my soul never again to stir....
And as I sit here
The roses turn withered an black,
the moon crashes from the sky,
and its trust I now lack....
A shadow in the darkness
Is what I shall be,
A shadow in the darkness,
No love will ever find me...
But apathetic is my heart,
Stone cold and icy as a glacier,
My feelings numb emotions
as to which I cannot feel,
To write a poem is like stabbing myself
there's no real appeal
My words confusing
none of it making sence,
My thoughts a whirlwind
To which my mind bends...
And here I sit,
Alone forever more,
the shadow in the darkness,
forgotten and torn.....
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Well written ash, if you need somebody to talk to feel free to e-mail me or leave me a message somewhere or heck even call me. *HUGZ*
Amber
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My first impression is that im now really worried about you. I know we are all far away from eachother n shit but im sorry that I haven't called you. You know Wes n I be kickin it crazy now n shit n it's hard to juggle all muh people at the same time. But like I've said a million times before, if you need me call me...you got my number. I'll always be there for u so holla at me when u need to.
Got a tight grip on ur string,
Kayla -
My words confusing
none of it making sence,
My thoughts a whirlwind
To which my mind bends...
Outstanding verse, great overall write. Should sence be sense? Just wondered, well penned. -
But apathetic is my heart,
Stone cold and icy as a glacier,
My feelings numb emotions
as to which I cannot feel,
To write a poem is like stabbing myself
there's no real appeal
i like this stanza best in this piece. I used to feel this way. Great write and nicely done.
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