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I am not you.

Looking at you I see

Someone not me looking to see

Who I am

Or what I might be.


You ask all sorts of questions

Leading me in a direction

Nowhere near perfection

And frankly this needs punctuation.


Give me a break please

From your disease

And let me be

Once again at peace.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 30, 2007

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    Good

    Questions on the tips of ones tongue never heard yet spoken loudly makes one think and thats a good thing