Only you can touch the silence
within my heart
forever completing a magic
raging endlessly,
Could you agree to share a covenant
and let the compassion show?
I must confess that my existence
would be less without you around,
Somehow with you by my side
I'm unafraid to meet my challenges.
Shadows and storms come on ahead!
Dec. 8, 1999
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Written January 21st, 2002
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Well said
Bill......this is almost perfect....only part that I saw that yelled out at me was right at the end. I really enjoyed this from the flow, structure, scheme and images. They say that love is the least understood yet most powerful of our emotions and your 'magic raging endlessly' phrase is intensely subjective in so much that it seems to be one of those 'you have to have been there' things.
Your pure expression comes through in this so much that to really appreciate it one is drawn within to their own experiences so they can relate.
Thank you.
Rich. -
ok, thanks.
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the magic is the emotion that is being shown here my friend
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W RITE ONN
Very nice
Reflects the determination of true love to defy tests and challenges.
Could you agree to share a covenant
and let the compassion show?
I must confess that my existence
would be less without you around,
Somehow with you by my side
I'm unafraid to meet my challenges.
Shadows and storms come on ahead!
The idea of a covenant is especially good. The biblical rainbow covenant is a contract made between God and the earth to never destroy EVERYTHING for the sake of infestation of mankinds short comings. -
Well written piece.As picture touches love and hormony in tranguility,the woven words too touches pleasant mode with a fine note.
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great
very nice poem! love the picture too. also great title. flow is really good too. even though it was short it didn't need anything more sayed you got everything. -doug- -
beautiful poem a nice read! a pleasure
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yes i agree with the sentiments expressed in this romantic and generic piece of writing.
i'm not sure what this line means:
forever completing a magic
raging endlessly,
how does magic rage?
best wishes with everything,
myron. -
This made me smile. I really enjoyed reading this; it made me happy! I love this poem, it really flows and it seems so honest. Brilliant work!
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