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She calls

The moon calls
to me
Her sister in secrets
revealing Her mysteries
as we converse from afar
never touching
but touched nonetheless
as the liberation of our laughter
is carried away by the wind
to be heard again
when next She ascends
Her celestial throne
where communion and joy
forever intermingle

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  • lovelabeledx-rated
    September 29, 2007

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    good

    It needed a stronger ending line but still was very nice. I got an amazing visual and it flowed well enough. I liked the first three lines. The ending could have been stronger though.

    Good write.