It hurts so much
but i feel as cold as ice
My face suspended in time
like my heart the last time
i saw you
the memory is all i have
I feel lost now
i caught myself thinking
of the times i was with you
Those times are gone now
Just small memories
sadly fading with time
but then all my memories do
i feel so alone
yet i'm surrounded
I can't find the ground
i'm floating in space
no one can find me
I'm alone with my memories
it's cold and it hurts
I thought the pain was gone
I wish i could find someone
to find me in this space
i don't want to be alone
It hurts right now
it will hurt more next time
These beautiful painful memories
Author notes
I don't feel 100% right now. Sorry if this poem worries anyone. I'm kind of in a dark mood.
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Sorry if this poem isn't what you're looking for, but i believe that some loves you just can't get over. So if you get rid of it i understand
A contest entry
- When Hearts Break. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended October 1, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~Release the Anguish, Hurt, Anger or Pain. Tell me your troubles.~ by xxRainbowDawnxx.
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"I'm alone with my memories
it's cold and it hurts
I thought the pain was gone
I wish i could find someone
to find me in this space
i don't want to be alone "
How can you be 100% when you are in so much pain?
When everything is gone all we have left are the memories, and that is where our problems begin.
It gets better with time, you meet new people and form new memories,,,,,,,,
Thank you for sharing.
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I know how you feel about loves that don't seem to end, I feel the same. I just try and not think about Karl and I, the way we used to be and all those beautiful memories. But I can't help myself, I just keep asking, 'Why... Why wont he be with me? Why wont he email me back or talk to me? Surely if he loved me he wouldn't just throw this all away? Surely he wouldn't want me to be upset like I am?" and many more. I'm sorry you feel the same way too. Man I loved that guy and I still do, I think I always will.
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I have no intention of removing your entry as it strikes much within my heart and I thank you for entering, and hope you feel better real soon, Josephine
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thank you ^_^
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