Another witch and vampire,
"Kids, don't bombarde me,
I'm running out of candy!"
I tell them before the kncok on the door,
I'm watching so carefully.
On the top of the world,
Or at east the balcony.
"Hm, they look game"
I say to myself as tey come to the door.
I drop the spider down.
The girl shreiks in fright as the boy laguhs,
At her wimpiness.
Another witch steps to the door,
As I set out my boiling pot.
And dragging that thing 20.34 feet sures takes alot.
Oh I think i know you-
Oh wait, another vampire, you came here before.
Take the Snickers and go run along.
I see spirits and hollows and banshees.
And the odd Pikachu.
To sum it all up..
I SEE DEAD PEOPLE!
A contest entry
- HALLOWEEN EXTRAVAGANZA - Open til Oct. 31st by Little Eagle.
9800 points, ended November 3, 2007, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thanks for your entry
So you like to play tricks on the trick or treaters huh
Nice job, a few spelling errors though.
Happy Halloween
Tammy
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Haha! Very very cute little poem! I love the way you summoned up what Halloween is to you. It's all wonderfully flowed together and is a real fun read. Thank you for sharing. Keep up the good work, and good luck on the contest
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Fab!!
Great piece you've written here. It is spoiled somewhat by the typo's makes reading it a little distracting. Other than that fab theme, I see dead people, classic! -
Fab!!
Great piece you've written here. It is spoiled somewhat by the typo's makes reading it a little distracting. Other than that fab theme, I see dead people, classic! -
Ha i like halloween and i think this poem is very sweet.Thank you for sharing and goodluck to you in the contest.Best wishes
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