[LL]
Agony...a memory of this present day,
curling its barbs in its own twisted way;
coiling and cutting, scouring to display,
torso torn of open flesh in spittled array.
[LVB]
Screams are dying, fade to black;
upon this life, I turn my back.
It is over, no matter how they attack
for emotion, of any kind, I lack.
[LL]
Suffering such torments in torrents of fright,
distressing discomfort clutches day and night;
pangs of pain plead ignorance to my plight,
hellish and devilish, anguish without flight.
[LVB]
The tears, they cease, and slowly die.
No more steel bullets from my nightmare sky
for I am now too dead to cry
and no more rain shall fall from these eyes
[LL]
Racked with wretched woes, biting to bleed,
struggling and striving upon insanity to feed;
excrutiation etched in hurt's echoes of need,
through the mill of affliction, sowing its seed.
[LVB]
What I once lived for, I now dread
hearing those voices, inside my head
Lost forever, in a sea of red;
I should be bleeding but, inside, I am dead.
[LL]
Disharmony drowns apathy, inertia to dance,
along the veins of heated throes only to perchance
this grief-stricken soul may finally stand a chance
to perish in peace, in this...its final stance.
[LVB]
Stale numbness courses through my veins;
There's no such thing as fear, or pain
what I would give to break the chains
just for the chance to feel again.
Author notes
Pain vs. Painless (Numbness)
Laura Lamarca/Immortal Obscurity
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A round of applause for a write beautifully inked...I enjoyed feasting my eyes on this piece...Matumero ghomakuru(Thanks a lot) for sharing such beautiful poetry...Peace
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Brilliant piece of writing here. The words are just breathtaking. I love this.
Wayne
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Perfection at its best. Thank you both for your wonderful words. I love this write. You write such a deep emotion between them both. Great job the both of you. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.
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You both are extordinary. I love this wright. You spin your words so perfectly together. I am glad you decided to join me once again in this contest. I had so much fun last time and will continue with them. Thank you both and good luck in the contest.
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