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I'm Gone, I'm Nothing.

Sitting in the corner of my room,
Alone in the Darkness,
Watching the blood run.
What am I feeling?
Pain? Anger? Depression?
No...
...Nothing.
I'm not feeling anything.
It's as if I'm dead.
Just a corpse.

Falling in and out of a black abyss.
I'm gone,
I'm nothing.
Screaming for help,
But not heard.
Shouting out my prayer,
But not response.
I'm gone,
I'm nothing.

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  • mathu is dead
    September 29, 2007
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    love it..
    the images in my head... of what it is to shout a prayer...
    anyhow
    great!