I never thought
I'd do the things I've done
I never thought
I'd take pills
or do drugs
or love it so much
I never thought I'd cut
deep bloody gashes
pale scars
I never thought
I'd ever think
"I don't know who I am"
Author notes
I've been thinking about this a lot lately.
A contest entry
- Free Verse Style Contest by Kari.
1700 points, ended October 2, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I have been there, too, my daughter...you are not alone, not now or ever. I am always on your side...
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Now that is power.
This is strong and I would also like to see you feed on this more. You have something good going.
A lot of people can relate to this write so well, I know I can. You've really capped it off with the final line.
A lot of people wonder that from time to time; I thought it a lot until recently.
Nicely done. Best of luck to you in the contest and keep up the good work.
Always and Forever,
Aqua Tinted
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great i like this i wish you would have feed me more on this but i think you did a excellent job on this keep your head up and good luck in this contest
jewels
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