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Mt. Angel

Rush of frozen air
cool my soul with renewal
soothing verses of tranquility
moonlit shadows grasping the sky

Trance-inducing rolling hills
Mesmerizing rhythm of tires
Slumberous sweet scents of hay
Headlights peeking across roads

Never ending strips of highway
Hushing trees at the wind's mercy
glowing light deluge into my eyelids
whispers of promising rapture

Troubles long ago forgotten
Finally time to breathe
Warm air rushing over cool bodies
Euphoria running through my veins

Peace at last established
Memories long forgotten being felt
relaxation forcefully coaxing me
Confrontations left behind miles ago...

 

I have at last reached a Utopia

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A little place, full of immense beauty.. A Utopia

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  • KissMeGoodnight
    October 1, 2007

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    awwww. i really like this!
    AND I LOVE YOU CUZ THIS IS THE FIRST POEM I READ W/O RHYME! OH THANK YOU!
    lol :]] most deff ty verrrry much