I Want Loose
By: Tralika M.
don’t leave me as I have been humble in my honest heart for you
I cant be accountable for things that creeps in evilness
Of barking destruction I am lusting in private ways of
Knowing you each day. I want beg are either let you
Leave this way its not my fault if feminine woman can’t
Handle journeys of different forms of others. I don’t curse
But I brush whores in stupidity off my sophisticated shoulders no
Other can compare to the jade gems of me .I am Mizz
High Heel Class and if that bitch make me loose my destiny I swear my foot will be up her childish ass.
Author notes
Expressing the thought of loosing
A contest entry
- Frustrating Anger by torieshawesum.
800 points, ended October 29, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I Want Loose
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this is one of the most stupidist poems i have ever read. i cant believe you chose to enter it in my contest, it really isnt real poetry. ha! IT SUCKED!
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Ooo OUch but...
I like it...strong words but I'm feeling how you arrived at your point especially "I don’t curse
But I brush whores in stupidity off my sophisticated shoulders". That line killed.
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i let anger unfortunately get the best of me at that time opps right
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lmao...the last line brought that anger lol...yea don't let anyone take away your destiny love!!!
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thanks its past now but i was a little in smoking flames writing this at the time
sxy99
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WOOO! I glad I'm not that person! The anger crawled through my skin in the last line! Good job! Keep Writing!!!
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Wonderfully written by you
deep lyrics have been penned well through this piece.
I agree, never let anyone underestimate your ability to put them in their places.
I loved the part when you said " I brush whores of stupidity off of my sophisticated shoulders"
LOVED THAT...nah, don't loose your grip, honey...ppl are always gonna try you. I know how you feel.
Keep it strong, and stay Sophisticated
ephiphany
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excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you have expressed this wonderfully love....
that is so true that "no other can compare to the jade gems of me"
your a truly a diamond my lovely wifey...
(((((hugz)))))
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you smo0king you so sexy lisa J o i have been awakened thanks i love you deeply
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