Your celestial soul
Reaches out to the heavens
Through precious prayers
In every line divine you pen
I feel you embrace another burden
For that's what angels do.
Please rest your weary wings
And read this heart of whispering words
For I treasure your friendship
And admire your sweet soul
I know your heart you always follow
But let your spirit refresh in others love
For even angels need to lay down awhile
And reap their rewards
For there are many seeds you have planted.
Some planted in good soil
Others you still search for that perfect spot
But know you are loved
And I send this message in a bottle
The very message you have sent to so many other souls
It has found its way back home
For your heart to be blessed
As you bless others.
Open the top
The breeze flows ever so gently
As the words grace your eyes
As you have shared these words with others
Now they fill your own cup
To the brim with tender care.
As those words whisper sweet
Three little words
That carry so much meaning
Reading, I love you...
Author notes
Option #2 And Sweet Sis, I Love You! -Hugs-
A contest entry
- ETERNAL Love and Friendship Inspired --INVITE ONLY !! -- ONLY for the Poets listed to enter by Stardust-luvr.
3250 points, ended November 6, 2007, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is such an incredible piece of love, respect, friendship - and adoration. A truly beautiful composition for one is is dear to so many of us here. Beautifully penned my sweet bro!!! You are such a word smith to the heart!
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Really sweet and tender Timothy. I love how you are never afraid to be vulnerable and soft with your poems. Beautiful stuff. I know it must have been beautifully recieved, as well.
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I enjoyed reading this but I fear that It gave me the feeling of a run on sentence. I like the imagery and the word choice is great. I would've have liked to see more breaks and better descriptions.
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What a beautiful message. I am sure she will cherish your words! It is after all that simple, you reap what you sow. If you sow the seeds of love it will grow and and yield you much love in return... Awesomeness!
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Awesome
Amazingly tender, very sweet.The words are extremely rich in sense and description.
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Excellent
Wonderful poem. So rich in images and passions. Best of luck in the contest. -
This is just breath taking and flows so softly to the heart and just rest there...She just has to love it!...Master Piece if I have ever read one...Winner for sure!...Thank you my sweet pet for sharing with me*hug
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I am so touched by these words, 'timeless' in a bottle, love come back ten fold. What a lovely poem and declarationof heart.
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Excellent
Awww, such a sweet and touching poem. Another beautiful creation from you great pen. Best of luck in the contest.
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sweet and gentle... definitely seems
to adhere quite well to the inspiration... beautifully and delicately expressed!
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Love the picture so inspiring
Awesome dedication of a spiriual love. good luck in the contest my friend a sure winner. Your words just flowed so well as they jumped out in to my mind, lingering in my soul. I love your opening lines truly amazing. LISA
"Your celestial soul
Reaches out to the heavens
Through precious prayers"
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Wow Timothy! Sweetie, this is just such a magical piece of encouragement, love, and of hope. So very well written, showing the true beauty of friendship. A very warmhearted tribute of strength to be found. Great write bro!!!
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Your celestial soul
Reaches out to the heavens
Great intro the whole was lovely to read. I bet they like it very nice. It touches the heart strings. Leaves overall feeling of cheer. You are so very right the words I love you are so near and dear.
Great job thanks for your support in reading my work.
I have been writing quite of few of them. Thanks for your praise on my page. gets better did all of the hard work. That picture was so cute I had to add some words to it.
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beautiful!
I love this poem... awesome job! thank you so much for being my uncle... I don't know what I'd do without you!
Love,
Kyote
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WOW!!!! This is enchanting, melodious, overflowing
with soulfully rich imagery and penned with grace and
a lovely choice set of words. Excellent This made me smile
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this is lovely bro good luck in the contest
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Loved your words you weaved together in this pen of poetry. I know these words rather well and are forever implanted within my heart for those who truly care.
All the best in the contest dear friend~
"But let your spirit refresh in others love
For even angels need to lay down awhile
And reap their rewards
For there are many seeds you have planted." -
This indeed was a wonderful piece for your sweet soul/sis. great job and best wishes to you all thought i surely doubt you need them. I can tell she loved it and loves you.
be well and be blessed
always
Tory
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this was a beautiful write and so full of amazing words
it held so much within it and i loved it
well done and best of luck
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sweetheart you have a way with your illuminating words to bring me to tears however this wonderful write opened the floodgates of my soul and sent the tears rushing for several minutes for what seemed a lifetime as your wings enveloped my spirit to make me one with you. As you know it has always been me wanting to take away everyone else's tribulations and make them my own but when it was my own I felt it was me against myself. My message back to you is I too love you with all that I am and with open arms you and everyone else shall renew this angel and her wings and make me whole again. just as I hope I can continue to make you whole!! Love you always and forever!! many blessings always xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
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This is such a touching piece clearly gifting the receiver the precious of a wonderful present...so beautiful too...best of luck to you...smiles, Terry
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This is awesome and so beautifully written!
I love the imagery and emotions in this.
You did a great job writing this one bro!
I hope that you do well with it in this contest.
Best of luck to you with it and keep up the
wonderful work here!
Jeremy0826
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Awww, sweetie, this is so perfect
So like you to write such an encouraging and uplifting piece for another soul
I loved this and I'm sure it will do well in the contest it's in
Many hugs
Sister Sandy
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