If you look into my eyes...
You will see...
That they act as a disguise
To hide the true beauty
inside me
You see white curtains
Blowing with the wind
And a strange girl
Coiled up in emotions
And you see man coming to comfort
And grasp the girl
And she falls into his strong arms
He slowly lifts her up to his face
And they share...
There first kiss
That girl...
Is me
Author notes
i chose to write about eyes. i would like to be a cat. No really i mean it!
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Comments
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Pretty poem. ITs very cool that you based it around eyes. flowy and beautiful! YAY
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Great poem you've written here, with great imagery and diction which flow brilliantly.Well done!
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Very good. A few spelling errors, but not a big problem. I really like this poem. I love the flow of it. Great job! Thanks so much for entering!
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