Jesus is coming to separate the tares from the wheat ~
Just like when He had Moses part the Red Sea ~
And it don't matter ya race, color, or creed ~
He's coming for those who chose to follow and believe ~
When He comes, ya may be doing wrong or sharing His Word ~
When he arrives, you can't say you haven't already heard ~
Satan's takes away, and it is Jesus who gives ~
Satan wouldn't die for you so that you can live ~
Satan's the Father of Lies.....he's a fraud ~
Secretly deceiving the world to keep you away from the ONE TRUE GOD ~
Don't you see the two spiritual forces fighting over you each day? ~
Satan's all that's dark and Jesus lights our way ~
Our way to Eternal Life thru Salvation ~
This fleshly and worldly way of life on earth isn't worth the hesitation ~
The way of this world IS going to pass away ~
Who's side will you decide to be on by that day? ~
Open your heart to Jesus and let Him show you the way ~
Because do you think life is really about this worldly illusion? ~
If you do,then you've fallen for Satan's End Time Delusion ~
Moral of the story is that Satan wants you to lose the opportunity ~
to hear God's calling of offering Salvation and to live eternally ~
Satan's a pimp, and he wants to know if your gonna be his Ho? ~
By saying YES to Jesus is telling Satan NO !!! ~
Written by: Drea Martinez
9-29-07
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I love the theme here. The analogy of satan as a pimp was cool because it is sort of true. Good luck in the contest.
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The ending is strong..your message is a good one, and it's very clear. it made me smile at the end when you compared Satan to a "pimp" and those follow him to his "hos." You maintained a street-wise sound throughout.
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Stand up and cheer. Praise the Lord. Yahoo. Great stuff.
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I really liked this and I agree 100%. Praise God that Jesus is coming back for us!! I really enjoyed the feel of it, it was like I was in a southern church listening to and old fashioned Baptist preacher! One quick comment, tiers in line one should be tares. Good luck in the contest and keep preaching the truth!! God bless.
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Dude this was wicked. The message is clear to me, and this is somethign that needs to be told. Keep up the wirtes man, and keep the message out.
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This was awesome.
I lvoed those last 2 lines.
They made me giggle but they're so true.
This was an awesome way to start my day
right before church.
Well done.
God bless.
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Outstanding poem, i enjoyed it very much. Reads kind of like a rap song
Defenitely has a beat to it. Well done
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