Luring you with seductive words
Embrace you with such
Tenderness that, it sets your soul aflame
More is all you can beckon for
Enjoying everything we share, I slowly
Take you to an
Exquisite paradise of pleasure
Awaking your inner most
Sensuous desires, I lay you back
”Enjoy this my sweet” I whisper
Your desires become reality and slowly
Overwhelm you as you lay
Under the soft glowing moon feeling my passion
In a list
A contest entry
- Make me go "ooh!!"...(Adults Only)-Prewrites Welcome! by Daizy21.
450 points, ended October 13, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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SIGH.....
Oh I love this one. Very sensual and romantic. With desire and love flowing through every line. Love it.
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ooooh, i like this!
well written
ang -
Wow!!
Magnificent Acrostic penned Sweet Soul
Wonderful images to leave a smile
I wanted to inhale Your pieces before logging
off and Thank You for sharing Your Heart
with all of us
Beautifully presented
Many blessings to You in the contest
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Another wonderful piece you have painted such a beautiful picture of passion and deep emotional pleasures ... Such a wonderful feeling to have someone who is willing to give so much of themselves.
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made me all warm inside
good luck in contest -
Very well written piece, sensual and deep.....
Conveying the message of love to "my sweet" perfectly clear.....
Good luck iin the contest
Tanya
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A truly passionate, and sensual write you have penned here. I wish you the best of luck in this contest
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ooo sexy poem.
very soft and yet HOT!
loved it
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wonderful
hi this is a wonderful loving passionate simple piece.
just beautiful.
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Yes...
The tenderness you show me and
Everything you do to give me a taste of
A passion I've never known
Sending shivers down my spine with
Every word, each soft caress
My heart skips a beat
Each time you whisper soft words of love to me
Passion ignites when you
Lay me down beneath the moon
Every part of me is
Aching with my need for you to take me to a
Sensuous paradise where I can
Enjoy your seductive words and tender embraces
Love always
Em
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Very sexy and seductive
Definitely would make a woman go "oooh"
All the best in the contest -
An exquisite paradise of pleasure...sharing your seductive thoughts and tender words. My best wishes to you in this contest, I am sure you will do well. Who could refuse such a request?
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What a piece of heaven this is! So beautiful in scenes I can only imagine and I can see in this piece of breathtaking poetry....best of luck to you in this contest...much love...smiles, Terry
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