Blades of green twiddle, shuffling scents from ringing clovers
Deception leers, swaying length of limb as if piper fluted
Waggle of tongue slither against soft patch of fountain
Honeysuckle quilt taboo of surrender under crescent moon
Crawl of mass penetrates passions secret, swimming in nectar
Anticipation of lustful bliss dissolve gardens virtue
Lover without grasp, entwines, arresting minds inhibitions
Hunger of fingers tips stroke skin of staff, caressing gently
Stars sprinkle gasps while blinking in voyeuristic awe
Descending... Heaven and Hell rumble in storm
Author notes
Prompt: snake in the garden; rolling in the clovers
In a list
A contest entry
- Adult (Quickie) by vindicativevisage.
600 points, ended September 30, 2007, 4 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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excellent take on the prompt. And the fact that you managed to use all three is brilliant, but then I wouldn't expect anything less from you...Deception leers, swaying length of limb as if piper fluted
I really enjoyed the strength of this line, somehow this one struck me from all the rest...thank you for sharing ~blessings~
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I really liked your take on the prompts that I gave you--you actually used all three. A terrific job...and I love the images you have in the piece. Really wonderful touch. Good job. All the best.
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this was amazing
your words brouight this poem to life
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Very well done!
So very sensual and yet, so very tasteful!
Much enjoyed!
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Nicely done! Great take on the prompts! Best of luck to you in the contest
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