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Priceless Is The Bond

Ah, aye..the closeness of a bond defies description
the bond that one cherishes more than trinkets of gold and silver
it is to be nourished with enraptured attention to details
fantastic featuristic funnels of delight
ignite the spirit's wilder side

How can comrades console without foreplay of former current friendship?
how can I reach you without our inner-link?
what morning dew is to the brittle dryness of the summer leaves
and, oxygen is to the man or child in debilitating need
like the ecstasies of a million orgasms-covertly condensed

is the bond...
bold benefits bouncing benevolently between both parties
cues cast casually, caught continuously, captivating conspiracy
silky sensational succulent sentimentalities superseding all

That lofty bond of caring enough to care, to be transparent
to be there, pliant and patient, pleasing and teasing
loving and sharing times of loneliness, despair, disruptiveness
the sounding board, the clarion call, crystal clear compliments
gentle reprimand of a fierce friend, not fearing impact

The priceless placement of the bonded connectedness of a friend
How much value can be visited upon such a union?

Author notes

#6 An unexpected bond, aren't those the best kinds...smile!

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  • BluRosePoet8488
    October 21, 2007

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    Well done. A priceless bond is of more value than any silver or gold. I love that reference! If one doesn't friends then he has nothing. Very well done. Keep the ink flowing and good luck!
    ~Donna~


  • ellipsist
    October 21, 2007

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    please do not rate or reply to my comment

    I love the reference to being more precious than gold or silver and the question at the end of this piece... to me, those two portions of this piece speak louder and more clearly than and other part...

    well done all around...


  • Grimoire
    October 12, 2007

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    Very well done. Nice poetice device, and such fierce devotion to the imagery, towards the friendship explained. Good luck in the contest.


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    September 29, 2007

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    your words make me speechless lullaby you bond with me,loftily and transapant,,best of luck my dear xxppInnocent

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