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Empty spaces need filling or protecting,
Scorched earth or pressing void, depending.
Patterned approach to reactive needs impending,
A vicious strike to chaotic deeds extending.

All things in balance, as and when.
All things in turn, now and then.
All things in time, here and now.
All things in mind, why and how.

Seen through the mind of a child, the truth often known.
Play on the field of a mind, the seed always sown.
Hear through the tears of a storm, the bell often tolls.
Ride on a Wave of the Dawn, the sound always rolls.

I am all, an Element in flow.
I am tall, a target to know.
I am toil, a task to deal.
I am that, the truth to reveal.

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This poem was written in August 1998.

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  • PlayfulPassion
    October 14, 2007

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    Now I'm smiling to myself here because I see so much within these lines because we share that element of knowing...being...doing! I love to partake in the moments sometime. It has been ages hasn't it?
    We'll talk soon
    Love ya dear friend
    Blessings~
    ~Joy

    • lkcl gold member
      October 14, 2007
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      hey joy - yes it has been. this is such a strange poem, so many hints in so many directions, it leaves you wondering "what the heck's actually going on!"

  • Midnight Haiku
    September 29, 2007
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    Nice job.. Interesting piece.

    • lkcl gold member
      September 29, 2007
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      thanks! it was written nine years ago - i hadn't realised that i'd not placed it on here, along with about fifteen other pieces.