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Witch-Watcher

Witch-watcher waits on her seat on the moon,
Falling asleep to the moon-bird’s croon;
She sees all the world, the world sees not her,
The earth spins around, all the clouds are a blur.

She blows on her flute, a slow, haunting tune,
For the witch-watcher knows dawn will break very soon;
She flies to the north and the north flies to her,
The earth spins around, all the clouds are a blur.

The next night, it is clear from her seat on the moon,
The only sound there is the red-throated loon;
She smells of the night and the night smells of her,
The earth spins around, all the clouds are a blur.

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option 2, picture h

yay!! thanks for hosting this contest, it's great! ♥ ♥ I'm going to be something super scary for halloween!! know what it is?? I'll tell you....





a nerd. xP hitching up my pants, putting on my dad's tv glasses, etc. oooh, sooo scary.

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  • Celticmoon
    November 11, 2007

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    OOooo..now this one I really like! You've done an amazing job writing this poem. Your rhyme scheme is excellent too! Great Job! Thank you for entering abd best of luck to you!


    Blessings
    Bel


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    November 11, 2007

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    Fantastic! Creative and the form is smooth. I really like the style, the content and overall. I just love this! Awesome job here!


  • leander Moderators member
    November 9, 2007

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    I have no idea if the title is a wordplay for 'Weightwatcher' but I do like it

    I think you have done a terrific job with this poem actually perfect flow, good rhymescheme... well doe!

    Thank you for entering this contest, I wish you the best of luck
    Leander


  • TwilightWolf
    October 3, 2007

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    weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee that was very good eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee