Why?
Because else the earth is a cube
and the sun is blue
and dogs meow...
Oh...
Because else Aussies fall out
and flowers close with sunrise
and Beethoven’s Fifth is never written...
Oh, you mean...
And butterflies walk
and women have no breasts
and there are only two vowels to our voice.
Oh, you mean this will happen when you will stop loving me?
I mean this is when I will stop loving you.
A pondering moment.
She suffered from those horrible moments of lucidity.
You know, then... ahmm,
linguistically spoken,
you should say it differently. Instead of...
They should know when... ahmm,
linguistically spoken,
it is time to shut up.
Instead of telling her
I kissed her.
By the time she caught her breath
her teeth have fallen out
and I have lost my hearing.
So it didn’t matter so much anymore.
aaa wooof ooo...
It might have been what she said,
yet it might have been only what I heard.
Though,
linguistically spoken,
I know it to have been perfectly expressed.
Please tell me what you think
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LOL. I smile, and laugh heartily at this quippy lil ditty. A wonderful bit of imagination from a wonderful mind.. Bravo.
Blessed be,
Billie Jean
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"linguistically spoken,
I know it to have been perfectly expressed."
...there...you've said it yourself, Joe. Who other than your creative pen and mind (and heart) can write the linguistics of love with such imagination, vision and skill? Loved this one...the wonder of language, the language of love.
~ Nicolette
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there are only two universal languages: maths and love. letters and words and numbers are just slaves to this reality. thank you my dear friend
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Nature and time could leave the traces and wrinkles and change some other outer shapes of body but never will change the shape and depth of this kind of feelings. I like the light and slightly humorous side of this poem like a frame to something incredible. Linguistically spoken - beautiful poetry.
~Sonja~
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depth of human sentiment (and probably if i was dog i would have said "depth of canine sentiment"
) is imeasurable. not because of its depth, but because of its complexity. you so rightly say - skin will change, mind will die before changing. thank you my dear sonja for your insight
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