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The Dream

In dream she comes to me
with nubian skin
and musk of sex
accepting kiss; enflaming lust.

A miracle besides me lies
with raven eye
and cocoa skin
She is conjured up from lust within.

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mcfreeman

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  • Daizy21
    September 29, 2007
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  • Tarja
    September 29, 2007

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    Strange dream=strange poem... not bad would benefit being a little more meaty though ya think? Oh by the way I think there was some kind of typo here:

    In dream she comes to me