Oh my love
I am surfacing back from
the ashes of our uncoupled love
however, it is not the transubstantiation of the ashes
a sweetheart which was me , you have dissipated
I am now a newborn darling
began again from
the ashes of communion..
and now its life once again prevails
In the sublimity of your core..
Oh My love
A contest entry
- what is lovely never dies by Nicolette.
1000 points, ended October 7, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hearts are resilient and will always come back, renewed and strengthened if we let them. This poem shows that we can be reborn out of heartache. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
~Lyrical
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I liked the sense of renewal here... to rise like a phoenix from the ashes. This poem can of course relate to love between two lovers but also to spiritual love between man and God. I liked the sense of hope here - thank you for this entry.
~ Nicolette
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rejuvinating
this is so profound and powerful,leaves the reader elevated and filled with hope.excellent write prabhuji!
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What is lovely never dies...a perfect title for this contest and your poetry, though you have chosen to call it 'the sublimity of your core'..Your words today are full of hope and renewal and of movement toward light and love...It is truly a remarkable write...Good luck in the contest. Peace, Rhonda
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lovely poetry, such wonderful broad scope, a reach into yesterday and a view of forever, best of luck in Nicolette's contest... PK
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Incredible verse.
What lines! It touches one deeply from the very start "I am surfacing back from
the ashes of our uncoupled love". The ability to think like this beyond the barriers of language is something God-given. All the best, ji.
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