I remember the tears rolling down my face
I was oh so broken
You tore me apart
I remember thinking Ill never fall for anyone
How I fell for you
Cause I was oh so broken
And I remeber watching all those girls
Get everything I wanted
They got you
Still wonder why I was oh so broken?
My heart felt like a million
Tiny little peices
What I thought was the end
Of a friend ship no more
You tell me you love me
And now with my new boyfriend
I feel like I need him
But I needed you
Back then
But since you decided to forget them
Do me a favor
Forget me
And feel like me
Oh-so-broken
Author notes
I dont know whats with me writing so much latley!
A contest entry
- Teenage Love Poems (May Be Prewrites) by ChrissyJean.
330 points, ended October 8, 2007, 49 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love the emotion in this poem!
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Wow Erin, that is so beautiful! You really captured the meaning of heartbreak! I think it's great you're writing a lot, you're getting better at it! I know I suck at keeping in touch with people and I'm sorry about that. Won't be long 'till I'm back in Valdez, for a WHILE this time. I'm doing okay, not great, but fine. How are you guys? Is Ginny mad at me? I should call her. Is Gwyn back? How's she doing? Okay I'll shut up now, but let me know girl! Miss ya!
Luvs,
Hannah
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This piece is really deap. that is how i feel right now but he just doesn't have other girls i just feel like he'll leave me and shit but i donno really good i love this poem ill make sure that ill read more and more of your work.
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