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Haiku 74 - Dawn

piccaninny dawn:
birds chorus a sweet welcome
to a brand new day

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  • azure85 gold member
    September 29, 2007

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    An interesting L1, and a wonderful way for the day to begin. You can hear the lovely bird song within your haiku, thank you so much.