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Multicoloured Migration

Multicolored magnitude,
Musical movements
Migration matters momentarily,
Majestic moods.

A contest entry

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  • Draig aine gold member
    November 2, 2008
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    mmmmmm

    magically mirrored

  • Durlon
    November 2, 2008

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    well done

    Flows well. I like the consistant "m" alliteration. Suggestive statements. Very apropos to the prompt.


  • MagicLady silver member
    September 29, 2007

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    I really love the background that you picked for your poem. The use of alliteration in this short poem makes it a tongue twister as well. Thank you very much for entering.

    Cheryl


  • cutiepie gold member
    September 29, 2007

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    I enjoyed the warmth of the "M" word...rather like the beating of wings, almost a humming sound. Brings life to the text beautifully Good luck in the contest