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[ salt sprayed ]

salt sprayed
from the bottle everywhere --
specks on granite

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is it fair for me to feel like a haijin on my hundredth poem?

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  • azure85 gold member
    September 29, 2007

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    This is a thinking haiku-and yes, a haijin is always one in their heart, no matter how many haiku they have written. The L3 is a very nice image, andyou can see the specks inside the rock. Thank you for your haiku.