Contrasting blue sky,
Pages turning in the breeze,
A book now opened.
Author notes
Enjoy!
A contest entry
- PIF - 5 lines or less about picture. by grannyeri.
300 points, ended September 29, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think?
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I liked It
Ifound this very good
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I thought this was excellent.
To me, I took it as life you were describing. Like you never know what's going to happen but at the same time you just need to live life. Great write.
Thanks so much for commenting on my poem. I really appreciated it. -
Incredible
I really love this unique beauty of your poem here and what really stand sout to me was your wording that really fits everyhting. very good work and kepe it up
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Thanks for entering my contest. Know that feeling you describe in your author notes - of not really getting wha tyou want, but close enough for now. This haiky certainly fits well with the picture.
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well done my dear friend the words speak loudly tho xxmany blessings always xx
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