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September Pre-Dawn (haiku)



September, pre-dawn
full moon in western sky
pushing clouds around

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  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    October 8, 2007
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    Beauty

    this is a very ebautifully penned poem snd what reallt made this stand out from others were the ebautiful unique imagery built into this poem and that is what I love about Haiku's is that with so few of words we are able to paint an incredible picture.


  • Anna Emkah
    September 30, 2007

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    peaceful & divine!

    Beautiful! I can see the moon in the early morning between the clouds. The night is slowly disappearing. You pictured a splendid natural view with your words... peaceful - almost divine. Very well done! Anna.


  • azure85 gold member
    September 29, 2007

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    Very pretty set of images, just like it is this morning with the moon between the clouds. Thank you for your haiku.

  • lyrebird gold member
    September 29, 2007

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    I'm generally not fond of haiku, because they seem too short to have a point, but I liked this. You should be proud of yourself - its one haiku of about six that I like. Keep up the beautiful writing.
    - Jojo