sound
of cracking ice
first thaw
A contest entry
- Haiku Overnight #4 by azure85.
600 points, ended September 29, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Simply majestic in sound and visual.
Blue
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The sounds of the second line 'are' what the poem talks about--the crack, then the siblant slide of piece on piece. Beautiful.
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/reminds me of an ice pond we slid on when i was a boy
When the cracks came you knew it was time to get off.
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Me too! Thank you for the comment about the haiku about first thaw and ice. Your comment was "haiku" like--great imagery.
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cracking ice...
Congratulations on a well earned trophy! You are really very good at this!
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You are a dear friend to say so--short forms and especially haiku are my favorite forms!
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Very descriptive, I like the use of sound in this haiku. It is something we have to look forward to, after winter time. Thank you so much for your haiku.
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Thank you for the haiku contest--we both love haiku!
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Nice Haiku with wonderful imagery!I lveo how people can write such amazing imagery in such a short piece. You have done it so well.
All the best with this
Gaylene
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Thank you for the comment on the winter haiku! The short forms are my favorite and I am in awe of your ability to make such wonderful longer poems!
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excellent
Beautiful haiku. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you for reading and commenting on my winter haiku. It (winter) is one of my favorite seasons.
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kinda short?, but poem writing is hard
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Thank you for your comment for the winter haiku! I read some of your poetry and added you as a favorite. Sorry I didn't write this before but had to catch up on work.
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