high school kids dance
a line of them move as one -
too much VH1
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Love you Tory
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A contest entry
- Haiku Overnight #4 by azure85.
600 points, ended September 29, 2007, 13 entries
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lol, I remeber having to dance for the school graduation - was ridiculous to learn all those steps and move as one - but amazingly beautiful when it is all organised and put together
Seems like perfection.
All the best and keep writing,
Never ♥
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Interesting
you took something that really does happen to some of us and put it into contexts thatbwe all understand and in a way you are suggestin that we all not watch it as much as we are use too. very ingenius. any ways very well penned and keep up the good work -
LOL Sounds like the first school dance of the year too! Very interesting haiku, and I like you used a modern scene for this. Thank you so much.
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ha ha this was awsome and cute
ilove this form and you use it really well
well done and best of luck
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this is pretty cute. i don't think i have it in me to write a haiku though, as easy as some people say they are, i don't know if i could lol best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Well done baby. This was cute..Wow them kids i know i know all about them little *angels* cough cough..
I love you too.
Good luck with this in the contest.
Tory
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fantastic! "video killed the radio star..."- popped in my head. a great little write here. a great image delivered in so few words. well done!
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