Sakura dancing
in the cool wind's orchestra
perfect harmony.
A contest entry
- Haiku Overnight #4 by azure85.
600 points, ended September 29, 2007, 13 entries
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Bliss-Filled Beauty
I really found myself smiling and enjoying this poem alot. what really made me enjoy this poem alot was the fact that you used a very beautiful part of nature and place dit into words that really stand out. very nice work and keep it up
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Very nice images of the cherry blossoms in the winds, and the peaceful effect of this sight. Thank you so much for your haiku.
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Thank you for the comment
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Intresting.
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Oh i like this sweety you have donr a nice job and it is perfect harmony. Goodluck in the contest.Best wishes
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