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If Fourth of July
were in autumn, there would be-
no need for fire-works
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Author notes
Fireworks photo by flappingwings
A contest entry
- Haiku Overnight #4 by azure85.
600 points, ended September 29, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Haha Well Putt!
I loved what you were talking about here. indeed there would be no need for fire works because the ebaut yof the seasons change would merely make a beautiful fire works like displayment. excellent wording through out and very well put together. nice job and keep up the good work
congrats on Silver a much deserved one
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A very beautiful thought for this time of year, and I bet it is gorgeous where you are right now. We are still waiting for the colors to come out more, thank you for these lovely haiku. I like the reflective way it is written.
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Thank you
Seriously we went on a ride yesterday to view the colors, this came to me while we were driving, I said it out loud and my hubby didn't understand what I meant, knew I had a haiku for sure then! LOL Thanks Suzie!
and good luck with your contest.
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Your haiku is haikuing me with your wisdom and beauty.
~Sonja~
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Thank you very much!
I very much appreciate your kind comments and applause!
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A wonderfully penned thought. I love this!!
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Thank you
I very much appreciate your kind comments.
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