Wind blows through pages,
Like your fingers through my hair-
Chapters of my love.
A contest entry
- PIF - 5 lines or less about picture. by grannyeri.
300 points, ended September 29, 2007, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Aww, this is a very good, sweet write. Keep writing things like this - it's truly great.
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lovely Haiku this! great write
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hey i really like this poem!!
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Liked this interpretation of the picture. Thanks for entering my contest. Pleased you were inspired by it.
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Thank you so much!
I didn't expect to win anything, I just happened to see the contest... clicked on it... and I thought up the first two lines in a second. I didn't even plan on actually entering anything, but I figured "why not?"
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A beautiful haiku...Like it!
All the best!
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Very lovely. Charming comparison of wind and fingers, perfect conclusion.
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This is lovely.
Best of luck in the contest.
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beautiful take on the prompt - love is a many splendid thing xx many blessings always xx
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Wow I didnt expect a response so fast
Thank you very much
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