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I didn't remember
leaving the book behind
until much later on.


When I went back for it
the sky had read my page.

 

 

 

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  • sassykitty
    May 13, 2008

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    that is such an evocative recollection. I particularly like the final line and the personification employed. Well done in using such minimalism to such great effect - wish I could!


  • sailor ptolema
    May 12, 2008

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    Heavenly!!

    this is a wonderful poem!!! I love that you give the sky the ability to read, great use of personification! Just a heavenly read!! It really blew me away!


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    May 12, 2008

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    What a most wonderful thought! the sky had read my pages...I really enjoyed this and the way it made me feel...Congrats on the gold and many thanks for sharing


  • Pollycheck
    May 12, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my short poems contest. This is just an amazing write and the picture just adds to the poetry.


  • Melodies
    January 11, 2008

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    Uuuuuuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!! So right this is! I like this poem so much. Fine thoughts and weirdly wonderful.

  • Judith Chandler
    January 10, 2008

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    Love the imagery of the sky reading the page. It's so simple and lacking in verbiage. Nice write.

    Congrats on the gold trophy


  • Mirthryl
    September 29, 2007
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    Congratulations on the gold!


  • basilisk
    September 29, 2007
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    Bravo

    Concise, crisp imagery, bold thought.

    Just wonderful!


  • jacbgd2 gold member
    September 29, 2007

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    Very thought provoking and different...  I loved the unusual thought of the sky reading your page!!!! This is great!!! Keep up the good work!!!!! Thanks for sharing!!


  • TwilightDazzles
    September 29, 2007

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    I really like this!! Very deserving of gold. Unique and creative take!


  • ScarletO gold member
    September 29, 2007
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    How cute and creative.


  • Mirthryl
    September 28, 2007
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    Very nice! Enjoyed the thought expressed in the second stanza, a whiff of the 'sense of wonder'!


  • grannyeri gold member
    September 28, 2007

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    Love your interpretation of this picture - simple, easy to read and understand, flows well and all that jazz....Thanks for entering my contest.


  • Stardust-luvr
    September 28, 2007
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    well done my friend the last stanza deff captures the write completely xx best wishes always xx


  • crimsondew
    September 28, 2007
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    like the last line..All the best!

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