I didn't remember
leaving the book behind
until much later on.
When I went back for it
the sky had read my page.
Author notes
pic curtesy of grannyeri
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF - 5 lines or less about picture. by grannyeri.
300 points, ended September 29, 2007, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short Poems by Pollycheck.
450 points, ended May 26, 2008, 179 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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that is such an evocative recollection. I particularly like the final line and the personification employed. Well done in using such minimalism to such great effect - wish I could!
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Heavenly!!
this is a wonderful poem!!! I love that you give the sky the ability to read, great use of personification! Just a heavenly read!! It really blew me away! -
What a most wonderful thought! the sky had read my pages...I really enjoyed this and the way it made me feel...Congrats on the gold and many thanks for sharing
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Thank you for entering my short poems contest. This is just an amazing write and the picture just adds to the poetry.
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Uuuuuuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!! So right this is! I like this poem so much.
Fine thoughts and weirdly wonderful.
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Love the imagery of the sky reading the page. It's so simple and lacking in verbiage. Nice write.
Congrats on the gold trophy
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Congratulations on the gold!
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Bravo
Concise, crisp imagery, bold thought.
Just wonderful!
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Very thought provoking and different... I loved the unusual thought of the sky reading your page!!!! This is great!!! Keep up the good work!!!!! Thanks for sharing!!
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I really like this!! Very deserving of gold. Unique and creative take!
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How cute and creative.
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Very nice! Enjoyed the thought expressed in the second stanza, a whiff of the 'sense of wonder'!
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Love your interpretation of this picture - simple, easy to read and understand, flows well and all that jazz....Thanks for entering my contest.
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well done my friend the last stanza deff captures the write completely xx best wishes always xx
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like the last line..All the best!
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