i feel so alone
no one seems to care
every ones gone
no ones ever there
i cry at night
but no one hears
wishing i'd see the light
pushing back fears
i slit my rist with a kniff
watching blood run dry
knowing i'll never be a wife
if i die i hope they all cry
the neglected me
they killed me inside
why couldnt they see
they made me commit suicide
Please tell me what you think
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AWW!
this is so sad! the depth in the poem was incredible... simplictyi on the outside but behind those words is a deeper meaning! i love this... and somehow i can relate (never attempted to commitsuiside tho) as in, the loneliness part! >.< keep penning kays...
SMILE ALWAYS!
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cry for attention? JK I like this poem. Don't take the first thing I said too seriously. I've felt this exact way a number of times. Keep up the good job.
Dani -
great poem. There's some spelling errors, but I really like it.
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cool
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