simple comradery may blunt sorrow
thoughtful intentions carried forth
across distance with purest love
reverberate in echoed microcosms
devoted to wounded heart therapy
umbrellas of sweetest protection
surrounding a loved one's heart
taking misery from life's direction
laughter freely given
under no vain conditions
validates a soul's existence
reality's sting suspended
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Very Sweet Indeed
This is a very sweet piece of writing here for your friend my swee. I loved this piece. Well done.
Keep writing and I will keep reading
Love
Me
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Such a very lovely acrostic you have penned for your dear friend! Beautifully formed piece of admiration and sincerity. Very nice!
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well done and you truly know and expressed my complete being when I'm not in this funk with your magical words of loving kindness. your words of true friendship are always cherished and loved wholeheartedly. many loving blessings always xxxxx
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wow this was amazing and absoultly brillantly written
it held a lot of affection and devotion for friends
well done and best of luck bro
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YOU GO BOY!!!
Yet another AMAZING Acrostic by the Marxby!!! Loved it!! Loved it! I liked "devoted to wounded heart therapy
umbrellas of sweetest protection"
and "reality's sting suspended "
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