A candle shed its life for us
slowly on tabletop
where hands touched, eyes met
an unspoken adoration
singly did vased rosebud smile
revealed a fragrant splendor
in closing space between
softly did lips and lives touch
in deep wells of meaning
slightly... from peaceful sleep
lovely whispers still fresh
skin still alive from your touch
writing something beautiful...for you
In a list
A contest entry
- Feeling Love In Pearl To Cry...PIF...2500 points by kaibab.
2500 points, ended September 30, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pre-writes by Laura Lamarca.
650 points, ended October 3, 2007, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The emotion and imagery are perfect. I felt the words as well as read them and they are beautiful, Great Job!
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Great job!
I really enjoyed it! It's beautiful.
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as soft as the touch of a lover, this poem - gentle and peaceful.
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I love this poem...this 2lines especially...
softly did lips and lives touch
in deep wells of meaning
Very very passionate and deep..your words are dripping with love and your style is just awesome..thank you for sharing this wonderful piece with me
Amarige
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awwww that was a beautiful write, it wud make me think all guys arent jerks. good job
Much Luv
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Aw,this was so sweet.
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It was an awesome sweet poem
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Pretty as a picture...this is a stayer! Thanks for entering and good luck in the judging. La x
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Thank you Laura
for your contest and kind words and the honor of the Emerald Cup...PK
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It is sigh to fly in flickered dance
melting crust to waxy moonglow
where eye is open pearl of gladness
waving arms to circle love....
thanks so much for entering
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This is so amazing, as always sigh~ You are so talented...
Lynda
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No wonder to see all those shiny trophies on your site. this poem is shining and breathing its own life. Beautiful.
~Sonja~
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Such a wonderful serene and soothing quality about this poem...soft as candle light, a sligh touch of skin on skin. This is really something beautiful.
~ Nicolette
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so soothing...like this write..all the best!
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there is something inherently romantic about candles..isn't there. Sigh..well done.
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