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What A Dream (God Save The Queen)

 

I'VE HAD A NASTY DREAM,
VICIOUS AND GHASTLY DREAM,
OH WHAT A DREAM!


NO, NO, NO, NO, NO, NO,

 

PICTURES NOW MEMORIZED,

I WAS SO HYPNOTIZED

SCARED I WAS MORTIFIED

OH WHAT A DREAM!

 

NO, NO, NO, NO, NO, NO, 

 

CLEANING THE TOILETS OUT 

SOMETHING GOT STUCK NO DOUBT

I TRIED TO PULL IT OUT 

OH NOT AGAIN!

 

NO, NO, NO, NO, NO, NO,

 

UP TO MY ARMS IN SHIT

I'VE HAD ENOUGH OF THIS

SOMEONE MUST OF DIED IN THIS

OH WHAT A SHIT...

 

 

 

 

Author notes

God save the queen, England
TOILET CLEANER!

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Comments


  • B.bdawn
    September 28, 2007
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    what anthem version did you use? and if so, exactly what was the job that you described?


    • Barry Hodges
      October 28, 2007
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      How could anyone not know? It's not TOO hard. Only the most famous tune in the world. It's not La Marseillaise is it?


      • Timespell
        December 4, 2007
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        I have just come across your comment Barry... Hahaha cheers, This contest was a waste of my time to be honest. Could he not see the bloke was a cleaner?
        Oh well never mind...

        Thanks all the same,

    • Timespell
      September 28, 2007
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      OPPS....
      I have not finished it yet (sorry)Forgot to mention that!!
      Anthem is God save the Queen. UK.

      Will finish ASAP.

      Thanks

      T.S