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Lost In Your Eyes.

I saw you yesterday,

standing all alone by river.

Teardrops from my eyes,

sent the shivers, rushing all back to view.
All those memories I shared with you,

but what am I suppose to do.


Now I'm lost in your eye's so blue,

love hurts when you know it's true,
But I'm lost in your eye's so blue,

love hurts when you know it's true.

Now I'm lost in your eye's, so blue, so blue, so blue.

Lost in your eye's so blue, so blue, so blue,
Lost in your eye's so blue, so blue, so blue,
I'm lost in your eye's, I'm lost in you're eye's,

I'm lost, in your eye's...




Blue skies turned to Grey,

my true love's gone and walked away.

Teardrops in my eye's,

thinking back to those better times.
All those memories I have of you,

but what am I suppose to do.


Now I'm lost in your eye's so blue,

love hurts when you know it's true.
But I'm lost in your eye's so blue,

love hurts when you know it's true.

Now I'm lost in your eye's, so blue, so blue, so blue.
Lost in your eye's so blue, so blue, so blue
Lost in your eye's so blue, so blue, so blue
I'm lost in your eye's, I'm lost in your eye's,
I'm lost, in your eye's...




Thunder cries in my heart,

I've died inside ten thousand times.
Cannot stop these tears,

for the love of mine.
All those memories of love with you,

but what am I suppose to do.


Now I'm lost in your eye's so blue,

love hurts when you know it's true,
Now I'm lost in your eye's so blue,

love hurts when you know it's true.


Now I'm lost in your eyes so blue, so blue, so blue.

Lost in your eye's so blue, so blue, so blue
Lost in your eye's so blue, so blue, so blue
I'm lost in your eye's, I'm lost in your eye's,
I'm lost in your eye's,
Lost in your eye's...

 

 

Author notes

Option 4.
Would make a good Butler me' lady.

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  • BabyBun silver member
    June 12, 2008
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    I enjoyed this - thanks and good luck


  • WayWithWords
    December 18, 2007

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    this was a little repetitive for me, but I did like the line that love hurts when it's true. I enjoyed the concept of this.
    WWW*


    • Timespell
      December 18, 2007
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      Thanks for reading and commenting.
      Never easy expressing the deeper meanings of the lyrics, without having the actual music to go with it.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~


  • second-born
    November 23, 2007
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    “Thunder cries in my heart, I've died inside ten thousand times.
    Cannot stop these tears, for the love of mine…” this piece is truly a heartbreaking one…and the repetition of the chorus reiterates the sadness and the longingness…thank you for sharing this lovely song…


  • Turtledove
    September 28, 2007

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    Interesting idea

    Just one thing up front, that threw me off abit..."you're" everywhere you used it should be "your". "you're" is a contraction of you are. You meant the singular possessive "your". Please correct it. You have a good idea, so let's refine it. Walt.

    • Timespell
      October 2, 2007
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      Thanks

      Thank you Walt for the award. The contest was fun and gave me a chance to dust up on things.

      all the best

      ~t.s~

    • Timespell
      September 28, 2007
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      Thanks Walt, I always tend to get myself mix up somewhere. So I thank you for pointing these grammatical errors out to me.
      Only by learning better grammar will I be able to conquer these mistakes.

      All the best

      ~T.S~

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