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I aspire ...

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... to reach for the stars
and bring a bit of heaven to earth
sprinkling the darkness with love
and painting over the greys with radiant joy.



... to tread softly and sweetly
leaving behind trails of hope
and realized dreams.

 

 

... to snatch, still living and breathing,
those doomed to the fires of hell on earth
and bring to them soft kisses
and the sweet fragrance of forgiveness.

 

 

... to become all that is the best of plans
and the most of what I have been given
so that, when my last breath has been taken,
I will hear the words ~

 
"Well done, my daughter."

 

 

 

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  • pattyann4500 gold member
    June 11

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    You have brought to me who you are as well as your hopes and dreams for your life and your afterlife. Thank you. This is beautifully written with a soft and clear Christian outlook and with a hand that does God's bidding. You leave your reader with hope that there are many more of you out there who are praying for us all and leading us all to the Gates of Heaven.

    Thank you so much for entering this beautiful piece in my contest. Patricia


  • Piccola gold member
    January 11
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    this is beautiful. Very visual and painted with a lot of feeling. I think it should have a gold.

  • JezIsaRos
    December 18, 2007

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    Christianity at its most beautiful! Such a sweet poem fills me with joy and hope. To wish to help others and make the world a better place is the most wonderful thing, which reflected well in this beautiful poem. I applaud you, and hope you get to hear that voice one day.


  • Sandal
    November 1, 2007

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    This is beautiful, I wish many more people had such aspirations. These things are good in themselves, but the expectation of approval where it matters concludes forcefully. Congratulations for bronze.


  • Sonja silver member
    October 27, 2007

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    Huh, I read it in one breath from the title to the end of last line. Very, very nice.
    ~Sonja~


  • poetryality silver member
    October 2, 2007

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    I too aspire to give my best, the sum, the whole of who God created me to be. It is His purpose that has us living and breathing. I have always aspired to touch with the gentle hand of love all those that I encounter. You have done just that with this soothing work poet. This is a poem of serenity and praise. What better words in Heaven and Earth to hear upon our "last breath"? Excellent entry. I wish you the best in this challenge and I thank you for this aspiration!


    Much Love & Many Blessings ♥

    Renee
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